Well, THAT didn't go the way I'd hoped! (But, deep down, I probably knew it was too good to be true that Dr. Fields would still be there...)
I am so happy on Tuesdays to see the next chapter come up, I was pretty invested in the story by Chapter 3 but now it's getting to the point where it's becoming difficult to wait a week! Great job, Steve and Ellis!
I'll probably go back and read the whole thing all at once when it's finished. I always have to go back and read the last part of the previous chapter to remind myself how it left off because my attention span ain't what it used to be!
Oh, damn!
Ta, Steve and Ellis. The children mopping was a nice touch.
Do they at least let you keep the piece of brain they cut out at the ABC?
I am pretty sure I don't want to know what that biohazard on the floor is/was.
Well THAT was a twist.
Go on, you have my attention...
Uh oh...
I found this chapter upsetting. Damn!
I had a feeling that Lorinda's visit wasn't going to proceed according to plan, but I hadn't anticipated THIS.
AAAGH!
Well, THAT didn't go the way I'd hoped! (But, deep down, I probably knew it was too good to be true that Dr. Fields would still be there...)
I am so happy on Tuesdays to see the next chapter come up, I was pretty invested in the story by Chapter 3 but now it's getting to the point where it's becoming difficult to wait a week! Great job, Steve and Ellis!
I'm planning to read the whole thing at once.
I'll probably go back and read the whole thing all at once when it's finished. I always have to go back and read the last part of the previous chapter to remind myself how it left off because my attention span ain't what it used to be!