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TundraGrifter's avatar

Nicely written! How about changing the ending a bit to " ...a lonely, sad, pathetic old man whimpering in the cold rain of his own bitter tears."

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fuflans's avatar

hey jammakin: you know what else is one of his most famous lines?

"o, what a rogue and peasant slave am i?"

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